Tuesday, August 24, 2021
poetry writing
Today i am going to show you my poetry writing. so I'm gonna put my sides and you can go through happened but it's not many a side but you can go on have a good look. you here maybe comment down below would you think what I can go and fix up. what you think of it so that's all I want to know.the poetry writing is mostly about the picture it says I've think I wonder I see. i have put my answer under each single one so you can have a look in you can maybe comment back as you think what I can change on that.bye
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Great ideas in here Raff! Can you recraft your ideas into a poem? Maybe switch them round a bit?
ReplyDeleteWonderful Raff! I really like how you thought this through and used creative ways to think! You have some inspiring words that made me hook onto your poem. Maybe next time could you make a catchy title? It will grab the reader into making them read even more! Maybe you could rearrange your words to make it into a poem? You have a creative way of thinking! Well done Raff!
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